Sunday, March 10, 2013

Rain AND Roof



L ike
A ll
U biquitous
G ivens
H omeless
T ears
E viscerate
R ationality
                                                                                    U ntil 
N o
D elusions
E vade
R eality

R ain
A nswers
F ace,
T ickles
E vening
R aftered
S ky

L aughter
U nder
R afters
E ntertains
D eliverance

 L aughter
U nder
R afters
E ntices
S olemnity



Posted at Poets United Poetry Pantry #141

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16 comments:

  1. Janine BolléeMarch 10, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    That's going to be fab.
    As is the Acrostic, which I am still trying for.

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  2. anthonynorthMarch 10, 2013 at 7:30 AM

    Great acrostic. Enjoyed that.

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  3. SusanMarch 10, 2013 at 8:26 AM

    Yes. Nicely built!

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  4. rchMarch 10, 2013 at 8:26 AM

    Great use of acrostic and that line would make a great song.

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  5. PanchaliMarch 10, 2013 at 9:43 AM

    Enjoyed reading this acrostic poem, Libby! Awesome

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  6. KimolisaMarch 10, 2013 at 10:41 AM

    Great piece, now I am curious about acrostic.

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  7. MaryMarch 10, 2013 at 12:37 PM

    This is very clever...each stanza. You have a definite talent with acrostics!

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  8. Abin ChakrabortyMarch 10, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    clever indeed.remarkable wordplay!

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 10, 2013 at 4:22 PM

    Wow. You really ARE building a home, one bag of cement at a time. It looks wonderful - and very impressive. I love your "evening raftered sky".

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  10. AnonymousMarch 10, 2013 at 8:12 PM

    Very well done! I am a new follower; wish I could follow by email, too.
    Here is my offering: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2013/03/womens-day.html

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  11. dsnake1March 10, 2013 at 8:39 PM

    lovely wordplay. nice build-up, in more ways than one. :)

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  12. Jennifer WagnerMarch 11, 2013 at 1:54 AM

    ooh nice!

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  13. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMarch 11, 2013 at 3:45 AM

    Clever! I think work always happens best in an atmosphere of laughter.

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  14. LLM CallingMarch 11, 2013 at 5:16 AM

    wow, to both the home and the acrostic - brilliant

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  15. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 10:50 AM

    This is such a fun post, Libby! I really like the accompanying photos and the imagery your words conjure.

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  16. Vandana SharmaApril 24, 2013 at 11:49 PM

    ENJOYED THE RAIN OF EVERY WORD............JUST OUT OF THE BOX POEM!!!

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