tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post8634227594981106001..comments2023-10-02T10:44:00.437-05:00Comments on The Blog of DonkeyOkie: Stories of Hope: His and Hersaelfbeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-65424551669805353842012-12-29T08:47:40.981-06:002012-12-29T08:47:40.981-06:00I thought what Sabio came up with was cool - then ...I thought what Sabio came up with was cool - then he wrote in his comments "I am making fun at how silly it is, how much work it is, how unnecessary" so I feel a little silly myself taking it so seriously - but I had fun doing this. Wouldn't want to think that hard all the time, though!<br />aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-81898073447947813302012-12-29T08:43:12.720-06:002012-12-29T08:43:12.720-06:00It was too cold to go outside and play, so I playe...It was too cold to go outside and play, so I played with this. aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-33487531833797747772012-12-29T08:38:23.049-06:002012-12-29T08:38:23.049-06:00Thanks for reading! To answer your question, I ha...Thanks for reading! To answer your question, I have lost loved ones in accidents and I work as a nurse with Veterans and war stories, so emotions got combined here to make the poem. As a nurse I've put down a couple NG tubes and charted output - but I really came to know bile when I had hyperemesis gravidarum! aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-34270951496154456552012-12-29T05:06:58.327-06:002012-12-29T05:06:58.327-06:00Nicely done. And thanx for the mention.
Great homo...<br />Nicely done. And thanx for the mention.<br />Great homonyms!<br />Grave rose pine story<br /><br />I like the hidden quatrain == sweet remembrance<br />Did you loose a lover in a war?<br />I have a patient I am seeing who has a nasogastric tube sucking out "bile grows on empty stomach and overflows."<br />Sounds like you've been there too.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-86251156080431939412012-12-28T19:58:08.597-06:002012-12-28T19:58:08.597-06:00I am familiar with Sabio's Kabbalic Homonym; a...I am familiar with Sabio's Kabbalic Homonym; and you did his form justice! Pretty cool.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-52671714823417064142012-12-28T19:01:53.369-06:002012-12-28T19:01:53.369-06:00This is very beautifully told, very gripping. The ...This is very beautifully told, very gripping. The hidden stanza is an amazing technique.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com