tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post3648484440206588080..comments2023-10-02T10:44:00.437-05:00Comments on The Blog of DonkeyOkie: Reality Squaredaelfbeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-60942306989839457292013-06-24T09:01:58.889-05:002013-06-24T09:01:58.889-05:00Such a thoughtful piece - everything levels out......Such a thoughtful piece - everything levels out...on day.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-21011988947308184942013-06-24T01:33:33.711-05:002013-06-24T01:33:33.711-05:00wonderfully done.especially your diction.uncannily...wonderfully done.especially your diction.uncannily, I wrote a poem last year where I too talked of the square root of hope, though in a very different context.lovely stuff.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-75347109859282655092013-06-24T00:47:39.568-05:002013-06-24T00:47:39.568-05:00I really liked your extended math metaphor!I really liked your extended math metaphor!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-44333065012868733332013-06-23T21:34:58.133-05:002013-06-23T21:34:58.133-05:00Magical flow, simply love this one.Magical flow, simply love this one.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-86980116307888271932013-06-23T19:12:20.678-05:002013-06-23T19:12:20.678-05:00I agree with the above comments! Great stuff!I agree with the above comments! Great stuff!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-80068987600301427432013-06-23T18:27:48.459-05:002013-06-23T18:27:48.459-05:00I identify with the truth rewriting itself. I hav...I identify with the truth rewriting itself. I have seen this happen more than once. Sometimes the real truth is elusive.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-3808921513506554442013-06-23T15:21:18.622-05:002013-06-23T15:21:18.622-05:00oh libby "equals the square root of our hope ...oh libby "equals the square root of our hope that we are something more." brilliant!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-28847415254332831302013-06-23T15:17:30.997-05:002013-06-23T15:17:30.997-05:00absolutely love this one! Am reading it out loud -...absolutely love this one! Am reading it out loud - it works so well. The flow and musicality seem perfectly judged alongside the mathematical language. Great stuff! As always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-16163296669843971922013-06-23T14:57:39.588-05:002013-06-23T14:57:39.588-05:00This speaks to me of that small hungry place insid...This speaks to me of that small hungry place inside me that wants be known in a way beyond explaining--and sometimes, those we love, get it just rightAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-84877471934463779422013-06-23T14:46:54.163-05:002013-06-23T14:46:54.163-05:00oh i love the opening stanza....the reality square...oh i love the opening stanza....the reality squared and equaling the square root of our hope...that is a zinger...and the truth rewriting itself....good stuff....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-71732239031138660962013-06-23T13:52:23.432-05:002013-06-23T13:52:23.432-05:00I love "equals the square root of our hope th...I love "equals the square root of our hope that we are something more." Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com