tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post4061633701660381719..comments2023-10-02T10:44:00.437-05:00Comments on The Blog of DonkeyOkie: Sunfloweraelfbeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-12946381771017834202013-02-23T22:28:00.245-06:002013-02-23T22:28:00.245-06:00I felt you could have continued expanding on this ...I felt you could have continued expanding on this theme - you gave the sense that it is in fact ever-expansive.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-46491578214052694652013-02-21T21:50:27.721-06:002013-02-21T21:50:27.721-06:00Beautiful, wonderful, love it.Beautiful, wonderful, love it.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-42959275598529439462013-02-21T16:30:44.512-06:002013-02-21T16:30:44.512-06:00Libby,
A very fine uplifting lilt with your verse...Libby,<br /><br />A very fine uplifting lilt with your verse. Cleverly composed as a fibanacci form.<br /><br />Eileen:)Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-75965903175568412192013-02-21T12:28:31.145-06:002013-02-21T12:28:31.145-06:00My comment vanished!
I love sunflowers! (unfortun...My comment vanished! <br />I love sunflowers! (unfortunately so do the deer and squirrels!) Nice job on the fib-loved the assonance and consonance!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-68523224864636549602013-02-21T11:28:43.897-06:002013-02-21T11:28:43.897-06:00Oh, I love this!Oh, I love this!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-4319062396209465402013-02-21T06:34:23.496-06:002013-02-21T06:34:23.496-06:00Great wordplay throughout :-)Great wordplay throughout :-)ND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-86066362487681960702013-02-21T02:20:02.607-06:002013-02-21T02:20:02.607-06:00Ah, I see how "om" would've fitted &...Ah, I see how "om" would've fitted "from a word spoken"! GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-12716413956817422252013-02-21T00:33:51.715-06:002013-02-21T00:33:51.715-06:00sunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence! You're a ...sunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence! You're a wonderful poet!GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-53935775769821736832013-02-20T21:54:48.118-06:002013-02-20T21:54:48.118-06:00WOW! I am way impressed, motivated and inspired. S...WOW! I am way impressed, motivated and inspired. Seriously.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-81249732389703304422013-02-20T19:34:10.228-06:002013-02-20T19:34:10.228-06:00So love the male/female inclusion. You did an amaz...So love the male/female inclusion. You did an amazing job, carrying the sequence further than anyone else who responded. Really well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-35367815418864443212013-02-20T17:19:13.053-06:002013-02-20T17:19:13.053-06:00Love this one!Love this one!Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3596879923259488589.post-13326172969521107202013-02-20T15:23:48.125-06:002013-02-20T15:23:48.125-06:00Wonderful! I enjoyed the whole thing but was espe...Wonderful! I enjoyed the whole thing but was especially impressed by the last two lines of 13 and 21 syllables & also "patterned paternity in maternal matrix of hanging gardens."Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com