Sunday, March 10, 2013

Rain AND Roof



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Posted at Poets United Poetry Pantry #141

16 comments:

  1. That's going to be fab.
    As is the Acrostic, which I am still trying for.

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  2. Great use of acrostic and that line would make a great song.

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  3. Enjoyed reading this acrostic poem, Libby! Awesome

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  4. Great piece, now I am curious about acrostic.

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  5. This is very clever...each stanza. You have a definite talent with acrostics!

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  6. Wow. You really ARE building a home, one bag of cement at a time. It looks wonderful - and very impressive. I love your "evening raftered sky".

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  7. Very well done! I am a new follower; wish I could follow by email, too.
    Here is my offering: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2013/03/womens-day.html

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  8. lovely wordplay. nice build-up, in more ways than one. :)

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  9. Clever! I think work always happens best in an atmosphere of laughter.

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  10. wow, to both the home and the acrostic - brilliant

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  11. This is such a fun post, Libby! I really like the accompanying photos and the imagery your words conjure.

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  12. ENJOYED THE RAIN OF EVERY WORD............JUST OUT OF THE BOX POEM!!!

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