one
sun
a world
united
living cohesion
an expansion of creation
wave of wonder to concretion from a word spoken
patterned paternity in maternal matrix of hanging gardens hinged by spacetime
seen in single spiraling galaxy of sunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence pollinating one honey drone's ancestral tree
Prompted by Verse First ~ Fibonacci Poems at Poets United and for love of numbers.
Wonderful! I enjoyed the whole thing but was especially impressed by the last two lines of 13 and 21 syllables & also "patterned paternity in maternal matrix of hanging gardens."
ReplyDeleteLove this one!
ReplyDeleteSo love the male/female inclusion. You did an amazing job, carrying the sequence further than anyone else who responded. Really well done.
ReplyDeleteWOW! I am way impressed, motivated and inspired. Seriously.
ReplyDeletesunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence! You're a wonderful poet!
ReplyDeleteAh, I see how "om" would've fitted "from a word spoken"!
ReplyDeleteGreat wordplay throughout :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this!
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ReplyDeleteI love sunflowers! (unfortunately so do the deer and squirrels!) Nice job on the fib-loved the assonance and consonance!
Libby,
ReplyDeleteA very fine uplifting lilt with your verse. Cleverly composed as a fibanacci form.
Eileen:)
Beautiful, wonderful, love it.
ReplyDeleteI felt you could have continued expanding on this theme - you gave the sense that it is in fact ever-expansive.
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