Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Sunflower


one

sun

a world

united

living cohesion

an expansion of creation

wave of wonder to concretion from a word spoken

patterned paternity in maternal matrix of hanging gardens hinged by spacetime

seen in single spiraling galaxy of sunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence pollinating one honey drone's ancestral tree


Prompted by Verse First ~ Fibonacci Poems at Poets United and for love of numbers.

12 comments:

  1. Wonderful! I enjoyed the whole thing but was especially impressed by the last two lines of 13 and 21 syllables & also "patterned paternity in maternal matrix of hanging gardens."

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  2. So love the male/female inclusion. You did an amazing job, carrying the sequence further than anyone else who responded. Really well done.

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  3. WOW! I am way impressed, motivated and inspired. Seriously.

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  4. sunflower seeded Fibonacci sequence! You're a wonderful poet!

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  5. Ah, I see how "om" would've fitted "from a word spoken"!

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  6. My comment vanished!
    I love sunflowers! (unfortunately so do the deer and squirrels!) Nice job on the fib-loved the assonance and consonance!

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  7. Libby,

    A very fine uplifting lilt with your verse. Cleverly composed as a fibanacci form.

    Eileen:)

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  8. Beautiful, wonderful, love it.

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  9. I felt you could have continued expanding on this theme - you gave the sense that it is in fact ever-expansive.

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